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Wednesday, 9 September 2020
my scratch about the fun run at awapuni school
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Hey Lydia I liked your fun run scratch, but i feel like it could have used more detail like the colours, maze, mud pit and hay bales, and also the animation could have been more lively and have a bit more movements rather than words. But rather than that I loved
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Arlo