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Kia Ora, My name is Hine I am a Student at Mangapapa School. I really liked how you made the heart flip around. Maybe next time you could add some more reasons why you like puppys with a bit more of words. . I liked the choice of background specially the puppy. I really enjoyed seeing what names you did. Hine.
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Hi lydia love the puppy and the heart you ahve done a cute and great job.
ReplyDeletethanks matilda is there anything i need to work on
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, My name is Hine I am a Student at Mangapapa School. I really liked how you made the heart flip around. Maybe next time you could add some more reasons why you like puppys with a bit more of words. . I liked the choice of background specially the puppy. I really enjoyed seeing what names you did.
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